Jump to content
Sign in to follow this  
CGALVIN3

What do you think about my vase?

Recommended Posts

CGALVIN3    6

Im 17 years old and have been doing pottery for 10 months now,

I have my own studio in my basement with a wheel and 2 kilns

Ive been selling my pottery to afford all this stuff but Im still trying to get better

 

any critiques on my vases?

 

trees are kind of my forte

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
Chris Campbell    1,086

Congratulations on being brave enough to put your work out there and welcome to the obsession of clay!

 

Your work looks about what I would expect from someone who has been throwing for a year. You are imaginative in your surface treatments and this will get more exciting as you progress. Your forms look a little heavy though so practice throwing cylinders until you can get nice even sides and bottoms. Throw, slice in half, examine ... Throw again. Boring but worthwhile.

 

Also, next time you photograph your work take away the clutter so it is only your work that shines. No need to have us looking around at the room and other artwork when it's your work you want us to focus on. :)

 

Please, keep sending images as you progress ... I think you have a good future ahead of you.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Thank youf ro sharing your work. I love the trees :-)

 

And Chris, what a beautiful encouraging post :-) And of course good advice for all!

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
CGALVIN3    6

Congratulations on being brave enough to put your work out there and welcome to the obsession of clay!

 

Your work looks about what I would expect from someone who has been throwing for a year. You are imaginative in your surface treatments and this will get more exciting as you progress. Your forms look a little heavy though so practice throwing cylinders until you can get nice even sides and bottoms. Throw, slice in half, examine ... Throw again. Boring but worthwhile.

 

Also, next time you photograph your work take away the clutter so it is only your work that shines. No need to have us looking around at the room and other artwork when it's your work you want us to focus on. :)

 

Please, keep sending images as you progress ... I think you have a good future ahead of you.

 

 

 

Thank you for the advice! :)

I took that in class right when it came outta the kiln because i was too excited to take it home into the photo booth i have set up.

I will be posting more soon! :)

 

 

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
Frederik-W    23

I really like the tree on the pot. Very well done!

However I think the pot is too black - it is so black that it eliminates any possibility of

showing hue or texture which would be a better background to your tree.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
CGALVIN3    6

I really like the tree on the pot. Very well done!

However I think the pot is too black - it is so black that it eliminates any possibility of

showing hue or texture which would be a better background to your tree.

 

thanks!

I agree with you on that.

It was actually an order that they wanted all black

i sold that one for $100

and the other one for $40

 

i usually like to use iron oxide with a glaze that lets it show through so it shows some of the texture i put on the tree :)

 

thank you for the tips!

i love hearing from different potters :)

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
CGALVIN3    6

I really like the tree on the pot. Very well done!

However I think the pot is too black - it is so black that it eliminates any possibility of

showing hue or texture which would be a better background to your tree.

 

thanks!

I agree with you on that.

It was actually an order that they wanted all black

i sold that one for $100

and the other one for $40

 

i usually like to use iron oxide with a glaze that lets it show through so it shows some of the texture i put on the tree :)

 

thank you for the tips!

i love hearing from different potters :)

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
Sign in to follow this  

×